Clan (double page)

I've been doing double-page experiments for comics lately.
I'm looking for ways to publish on webtoons and some stories to develop, so I've been throwing these out to check people's interest and also test how long it takes me and if I can make it.
I will not be using the webcomic single panel scheme tho, I still like thinking in "pages" and hope for a possible print run.

I'm always on the fence when it comes to lots of text, but on the other side, I also like being --- verbose. Which could be easily fixed of only I SCRIPTED texts before making stuff. I just hope those clusters of words sound cool enough.

I'm particularly happy of my swamp panel. I think it adds a good theme to the double spread. It's a bit incorrect to add something that looks good only when the two pages are together, but I fancied the exercise.

99% of the time I recognize I'm drawing unproportioned eyes and they're too big, but why giving up the fun of making wrinkles and super weird expressions visible from a whole mile?

I've been nicer to myself this time and panelled before linearting, so at least I know when people can cross those borders.

Honestly this is one of the nicest sketches I've ever done for a comic.